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posted 27th Sep 2014, 3:25 AM

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27th Sep 2014, 10:55 AM

Lee M

Another great couple, and the lighting and colouring are excellent, especially with the appropriately honey-coloured background. And of course it's nice to know Leonurus is back to her old self.

I do have to quibble with the grammar, though. "and then hypnotized" would read a lot better as "and then being hypnotized". Also, "desert" should be "dessert". (Which reminds me of this: http://pbfcomics.com/145/ .)

Yeah, that's going to be a very satisfying dessert.

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27th Sep 2014, 10:24 PM

lorddarke

Thanks Lee,I fixed it.

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27th Sep 2014, 2:07 PM

typhon36

I suppose someone has to say it. It's not necessarily wise to have dinner with someone who can have you for dessert. The answer then comes 'only if you enjoy it and nobody dies'.

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27th Sep 2014, 2:08 PM

typhon36

They make a beautiful couple, by the way. Good stuff Ed.

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27th Sep 2014, 10:26 PM

lorddarke

Thanks Bob, I'll tie up all the loose ends before starting the old Dreamwalk journals again. Ed.

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27th Sep 2014, 4:47 PM

Stever

I love the golden background against the blue skin.

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27th Sep 2014, 10:29 PM

lorddarke

Thanks. Glad you like it. (Stever,did you work out that problem with your avatar?)

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28th Sep 2014, 6:53 PM

Stever

Yeah, basically I just changed it for a new start.

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