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posted 19th Aug 2015, 12:37 PM

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19th Aug 2015, 12:37 PM

lorddarke

Now we begin the new pages, and continue this story to the end.............

I am happy to give credit to: LEE M. and KIMBER C. as co-writers. Without their help this new material would be miss spelled, badly written, and suck at grammar......And god knows what else.


Also thanks to Bob Partridge, who also helped.

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19th Aug 2015, 4:32 PM

Lee M

So here it is, the first page featuring my humble efforts, and I couldn't be more thrilled.

For whatever reason this scene got left out of the original Dreamwalk Journal, and the storyline skipped to another outdoor journey. The scene did exist as a text piece by Kishma Danielle, which I've helped to adapt into dialogue and descriptions.

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19th Aug 2015, 11:02 PM

lorddarke

Lee M- I'm working on a new page front that will include you and Kim as co-writers, And also mention Bob too.

I had an argument with Kishma over the number of characters involved in the story. I wanted to have Suemac, Theta and Leonurus leave at this point, as I felt they were unnecessary to the story and made the scenes look crowded. That's why we dropped the whole arc and went with starting it over with the story leaving the hive. But Kishma's feelings never really recovered after that, and we both decided to drop the story and close the book on Dreamwalk. It was a very long time before she showed any interest in continuing. Ed

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20th Aug 2015, 1:07 AM

Lee M

It's always a shame when friends fall out over things like that. I'm glad you eventually did continue, and not just because of my involvement.

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20th Aug 2015, 2:25 AM

lorddarke

Lee M.- You helped, more than you know.

Ed.

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20th Aug 2015, 9:22 PM

Rod Shelley

Hey Ed, just thought I'd drop by and check things out - and say "Thanks" for your comment on my Girls From T.N.A. series and photography. And also to say how much I enjoy your wonderful, fun characters! Now that I've found you, I'll be following along. I'm not going to be around much (if at all) at Renderosity any longer with that abortion of a "Revolution" they inflicted on us. I'll be doing some updating on my website, but it will actually work when I'm done!

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20th Aug 2015, 10:16 PM

lorddarke

WOW! Hot damn! Thank you for looking! I love your girls.( I'm not into human characters very much, but your story and characters have a simple charm and personality that I find very entertaining.) And Renderosity?.....Don't get me started.

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