THETA AND THE ROBBERFLY PAGE 1A

posted 18th Feb 2016, 1:39 AM

THETA AND THE ROBBERFLY PAGE 1A
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18th Feb 2016, 7:03 AM

typhon36

So the drama unfolds.... that's a superb page Ed, brilliantly laid out and finely sequenced... distance shot, close up Robber Fly, close up Theta then medium shot summing up the action. I'll leave the lighting colour and shadowing and contrast to the experts but to me the golden light highlighting Theta's wings and the patterning on the floor and the column are wonderful.

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18th Feb 2016, 9:17 AM

lorddarke

typhon36- Thanks Bob, I keep trying to improve, and I'm glad you approve.

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18th Feb 2016, 7:20 AM

typhon36

Meanwhile plot wise Theta is copping it from the greedy sneaky cowardly low truce breaking Robber Fly. He's practically paralysed and helpless and being orgasmed the hell out of, poor fellow, but apparently is still bravely resisting every bit of the way... going from the dialogue.

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18th Feb 2016, 9:18 AM

lorddarke

typhon36- Boy, you got that right, Theta's about to have some serious cramps from being over worked! But that is what robberflys do..... And we're at 60 on the most read list!! SQUEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!

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18th Feb 2016, 7:07 PM

Lee M

Typhon36 - Couldn't agree more about the art quality. All I have to do is come up with a few words to describe a scene, and then have the privilege of sitting back and seeing how Ed does justice to it.

The ratings Ed's talking about are on the Belfry Webcomics Index in the Science Fiction category. Somehow after slumping from 100 to 140, we then shot up to 60. I'm not complaining, but boy am I confused!

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18th Feb 2016, 9:13 PM

lorddarke

Lee M. "A few words".......You are now the chief writer for the story!!! Without you, I'd have to go back to fumbling together a bunch of ideas, and slap them together into a badly spelled mess, with even worse grammar!.

Lee M- Your not the only one, I've never been able to make sense of it! Ed.

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19th Feb 2016, 3:55 AM

Lee M

Well, I may have a talent for understatement...! But as I've said before, writing this story really doesn't feel like a chore for me.

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19th Feb 2016, 9:08 AM

lorddarke

Lee M- GOOD! I hope it remains a lot of fun for you, That's why I do it. Ed.

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